The old abandoned house atop the hill was a favorite hangout spot for Nidhi and Alok. They preferred meeting there most evenings. The sunset was one of the attractions. The other was the variety of birds chirping as they headed back to their nests. On rainy days, it was just pure bliss to see the water dripping through the leaves, giving the house a surrealistic feel.
Today, as they stood beside the window on the first floor from where they could get a good view of the sunset, a rustling sound from somewhere inside the house disturbed them. When Nidhi and Alok looked back, they couldn’t see or hear anything at all. They brushed off the disturbance and went back to enjoying the sunset, taking pictures and selfies. A few minutes later, they heard the sound again. This time, when they looked back, they could just see a hooded figure roaming the house. Nidhi and Alok glanced at each other and followed the sinister figure.
“Did you know this house was haunted?” Alok asked in a low voice.
“Haunted? No way!” Nidhi wasn’t game for any such stories.
“I heard a couple were murdered here in the 1970s. That was the period when this house was abandoned. But I haven’t heard any spooky stories yet,” Alok remarked.
The hooded figure appeared again. They noticed that the hood was white. It seemed to flail its arms and walked as if struggling for balance. Nidhi and Alok could feel the tension build up. Suddenly, it disappeared into an adjoining room.
“I guess it’s gone,” Nidhi said.
“Yeah. Let’s leave too, it’s getting darker,” Alok suggested.
“Are you afraid?” Nidhi pulled Alok’s legs.
But when she looked in his eyes, she saw an incredulous expression. Nidhi followed his eyes and saw the hooded figure approaching them with quick steps. Both stood rooted to their position with bated breath.
It appeared to watch them for a while and in an instant, came closer. Then, in a swift motion, the hood came off.
“Happy Friday the 13th!”
It was Neeraj, a mutual friend, who was playing a silly prank on them. He gleefully accepted the admonishments from Nidhi and Alok before they had a nice laugh over what happened. The three of them then set off for the city, eager to munch on their favorite pizza.
I’m taking part in the Write Tribe ProBlogger Challenge. The prompt for today, Day 4, is ‘Bated breath’.
The ending made me smile. Such harmless pranks from friends are always acceptable. Happy Friday the 13th. 😀
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Thanks, Vinitha. It’s good to have friends like that who play funny pranks. Happy Friday the 13th to you too, he he he 😀
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An after-prank pizza is always welcome too. 🙂 I guess it’ll be Neeraj’s treat. 😛
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Yeah, very welcome that’ll be. I think Neeraj will be treating, yes 😀
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They put a brave front. I would have run away 🙂 Great read!
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I guess they were brave because there weren’t any spooky stories before and they held their nerves. Thank you, Meha! 🙂
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Gosh! That was something! Scary and funny, excellent Sreedeep!
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Ha ha ha, yeah. Such a prank on Friday the 13th would give anybody a little scare. Thanks, Aesha.
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I waited with bated end till the end and felt revealed at the end with that happy note marking the end!
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Ha ha ha, thanks Keerthi. That was an awesome comment!
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Ha ha 😀
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Very nicely written, liked the flow and use of prompt 🙂
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Thanks, Ashwini!
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Wow! What a fun story. Love the way you set a scene.
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Yeah, it was fun writing this as well. Thank you, Apeksha!
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This could have gone down a dark path but I rather liked the fun ending. Left me smiling rather than scared.
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He he he he, yeah could have gone either way. Glad you smiled at the end of it 🙂
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They were brave to hang around; I would have run away screaming. On second thoughts I wouldnt be near an abandoned house in the first place 😉
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Ha ha ha ha! I guess they were brave because they hadn’t heard any ‘ghost’ stories and the like. Good that it was just a friend playing a prank!
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The twist was simply good!😂😂😂😂😂
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Thanks, Nikita. Glad you liked the twist. I’m still a novice when it comes to twists but it’s definitely something I’m working on improving.
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Thank God, you ended it without many twists. I would have started bitting my nails. Loved the prank, and would like to try it out on someone when I Have the guts to visit a haunted place alone. 😉
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Ha ha ha ha, sure. Thanks, Sheethal!
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That was very nicely written. Gripping and then twisted
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Thank you, Ravi for your kind words and also for stopping by!
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Love reading stories so will stop by often
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You are welcome! Thanks!
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That was scary at the start. I would have run away the moment i would have spotted the hooded figure with my imagination going wild! It was nice twist in the end though!
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Spooky houses scare us always. I’m glad this was just a prank. Thanks, Nibha.
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Nice build up.
You know, I have a friend from college. We wish each other every friday the 13th. Don’t really remember how the tradition started though 😂
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Thanks, Bhavya. That’s interesting. What do you two wish for? 😛😛
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